Friday 17 June 2016

the skatepark poem


 The skatepark

The skatepark was usual enough ;
It had skaters doing cool tricks, ramps, grind rails, a bowl,a half pipe,
Mini ramps and a mini quarter pipe that I never use.Me  My brother and my friends do what boys do - drink fizzy, graze our  knees when we  fall off, be dripping with sweat, spend hours and hours practicing tricks , landing new tricks and being real happy, and eat pies and  rolls from the bakery.
   
       Doing nothing important .
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous17 June 2016 at 12:34

    Hi sonny that poem was awesome I don't think you could make it any better from Jack

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  2. Anonymous28 June 2016 at 11:49

    Hi Sonny cool blog like The SkatePark

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